Continuing, about a year ago my sister kept on bragging that she wanted to dye her hair, but she wanted to do something out of the ordinary, something unique. Me and my sister kept on giving her advices of how and which colors to dye it, but she didn’t seem to be satisfied with any of them. So then my mother got tired of hearing my sister complain and she said “ You know what I am going to design the way I want your hair to look, on the computer.” My sister didn’t pay much attention to my moms comment, and she went on bothering the whole world because she didn’t know what color to dye her hair, and just then my mother seemed to call her over. Me and my other sister were in the room and all we can hear my sister say was “ Oh my goodness I love it.” When me and my sister had took a peek at it, it was unique, crazy, colorful, and beautiful all at the same time. My sister printed it out and took the design with her to the salon and the lady that dyed my sisters hair fell in love with it. She told my mother that it was a great idea and that she would be more than happy to dye my sisters hair that color, and so she did. When we picked my sister up from the salon her hair looked beautiful. Lucky enough Gunderson’s HomeComing was that weekend and she won HomeComing Queen.
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ReplyDeletek well i really liked the story about your mom she seems really creative and someone who always has ideas for the future. now mr.thompson said that we supposed to give you feedback on the story to improve on it and the thing i would say to change is the thing about your sister dying her hair story and instead of just using the word sister use there names because your using more than one sister in the story. but otherwise great story!
Well I like the story. I agree with Gaby on the sister thing. Umm. Oh yea if I hadn't read your controlling impression I would of thought this story was about your sister, I'm thinking you might want to talk a little more about mom.
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